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I am a little bit different
I am a little bit weird
I don’t care if it’s everywhere
That I’m the one to be feared

I am alone in this world
So far without a trace
Of anyone alike / with the same psyche
They just won’t show they're face

So I'm through being like you
Going along with your flow
Taking all the crap till here
Knowing all the things you know

I don’t wanna be a part of you
A part of hypocrisy
Everyone acts/they won’t face the facts
That inside you're just like me

But I won’t give a single damn
Or wish I had just one day
To live and be like the rest of you
To exist and join your ways

You laugh at me ‘coz I'm not like you
But how blind can you be?
The reason why I'm smiling back
Is because of my pity

My pity of the unchangeable fact,
The one truth in this game -
You laugh at me because I'm different
But I pity you ‘coz you’re all the same.
©2003-2009 ~echelon5
:iconechelon5:

Author's Comments

this piece is my 3rd one since.i haven’t been getting much feedback.but ill try and do better.

This one,like the ‘rejects anthem’ means a lot to me.coz even till now I gotta fight for my place in this world…..
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hey chris,power to yah!!!
Are there any Filipinos on deviant?i wonder……

This piece is one of my favorites….i love it…hope u guys will too

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:iconthe-fisherman:
once again , you show us your great talent....the best part of this is the wya ll the rhymes come together at the end for the final sentence....if only i could rhyme like that....haha its good stuff man , keep it up..sooner or later the feedback comes...

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Turn around and walk away right now.Looks like this shit's gonna get messy...
:iconmaho0ya:
"So I'm through being like you
Going along with your flow"

beautiful.. :tears:
:iconechelon5:
i cant thank you enough.
this really means a lot to me.

TANKS!!!!!
:iconmaho0ya:
always happy to help a fellow shs student (well, an ex student neway! =P)
:iconbabacancer:
hey man this stuff is really good. ummm all i do is give generic comments actually, my comments arent really that great and they never serve the purpose, anyway enough about me. never be the same :headbang:

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i crumble in the dusty corner, i dissapear into a memory of what i once was.
:iconfuhk:
yes im with chris here...... ''once again , you show us your great talent....''. dude i always said ya rocked at writin n stuff. dude ya wrote one bout walkin thru d streets wind blowin thru the tress or somat like that. stick that 1 onDA cos that one really kicked ass! :matrixfight:

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